please correct the grammar in this sentence

[ajay600]

i'm planning to use this as my resume objective... but i have a feeling that it has some grammatical error.. can u correct this or make this sentence better for me.. By the way, im applying for the post of Quality Assurance engineer ..
here is my objective
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To work for a leading Organization with a global footing, where I can effectively contribute my skills as Software Professional possessing competent Technical Skills.
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-thanks in Advance

 

[dashing.sujay]

Is there really an error?

 

[Sarath]

i'm planning to use this as my resume objective... but i have a feeling that it has some grammatical error.. can u correct this or make this sentence better for me.. By the way, im applying for the post of Quality Assurance engineer ..
here is my objective
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To work for a leading Organization with a global footing, where I can effectively contribute as a Software Professional possessing competent Technical Skills.

Don't write skills twice.

 

[koolent]

No problems, just go on..

 

[asingh]

To work for a leading Organization with a global footing, where I can effectively contribute my skills as Software Professional possessing competent Technical Skills.

Leveraging my technical and software skills to contribute positively to a global organization.

 

[Dragonslayer]

Leveraging my technical and software skills to contribute positively to a global organization.

Wah! kya baat hai! agreed.

 

[ajay600]

Leveraging my technical and software skills to contribute positively to a global organization.

thanks mate, that helped!!

 

[Faun]

I write the objective to fill this resume so that you can hire me. Now, shut up and hire me.

 

[rhitwick]

I write the objective to fill this resume so that you can hire me. Now, shut up and hire me.

Add a meme here too

@OP looks good but unnecessary capitalization of words.

To work for a leading Organization with a global footing, where I can effectively contribute my skills as Software Professional possessing competent Technical Skills.

And "where" should always sit exactly after an object.

To work for a leading organization where I can contribute my competent technical skills as a software professional.

 

[Faun]

Add a meme here too

memes are already overused and worn off when you see one trending on facebook.

 

[rhitwick]

memes are already overused and worn off when you see one trending on facebook.

I was thinking a meme in the line what you wrote..."shut up and take my money" kinda

 

[asingh]

thanks mate, that helped!!

KISS = Keep it Short and Simple.

By the way, no one really cares about that line anyways. You could probably write "I am peter pan" there, it would hardly make a difference.

Other parameters are evaluated more closely.

 

[Faun]

While interviewing, shout "Look, there is a bug on your hat Mr. Interviewer" or "lady, stop bugging me" or "bug off you wonka".

Guaranteed to get better grading from others in evaluation.

I was thinking a meme in the line what you wrote..."shut up and take my money" kinda

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